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Gypsy Pinkie

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Have some gypsy pinkie :) this has ben my favourite song for two years now.

Omg i used 85 layers xD
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alrighty it's critiquing time! I've never written an official critique before. I've just kind of given advice, ya know? I guess I'll start out with saying it looks like your proportions are improving, so continue to work on that! Because it's working! The shading looks good, I like this new technique. While the colors of the magical aura and the background look good individually, I would have picked something that contrasts more when putting one against the other. Also the bangles look a bit out of place the way they're just in the corner alone. You should look into techniques for shading/highlighting different textures so it doesn't look like everything is made of the same stuff. In cell shading it's no big, but when you get more detailed it becomes important. The bangles, crystal ball, jewels, and tambourine jinglies should all have metallic shading. The shading should be sharp and the highlights should be bright. It would also help the effect if there were reflections, but I don't even do that most of the time. Your eyes are getting better! I know I went through a ton of different eye styles before settling on one I liked and I still alter it slightly from time to time. Okay well this is getting long and I think that's all I've got to say. I hope that helps!

PS: none of the rating things had to do with execution they were all concept questions and I'm not a very philosophical person or whatever so I didn't put much thought into it.